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Nouf, amazing! I super like the way you respond to the Philip’s text, and I think you clearly got her message. In her scattered words on all over the page, she alludes to the slaves who are drowning after the ship crew got rid of them to materialize financial purposes. The half-words signify men who are floating whose bodies form two halves while sinking, one above water and the other below it. Philip wants the whole world knows and feels them. And the way you transcribed your feeling is perfect that means not only one reader feel them, but also every reader gets the that sympathetic feeling since the words are scattered as well.
Nouf, I do believe that you got the writer massage. That she wanted her audience to be involved in her work! And you clearly did so. That was fascinating!