How Not To Be An Internet Artist

Mark Amerika’s How To Be An Internet Artist constitutes a differential text that perturbs the reader because of its rich collection of multiple non-consistent writings. There is no plot that runs over the whole e-book, but every section seems as if it is completely separate from the rest of the book. Through this style, Amerika implies that this is what people, who usually surf the internet, should expect to face. When a person surfs the internet, s/he moves from one site to another without a consistency of the topics or even the value of the information sometimes. The existence of “Post-Adolescence,” “Gertrude Stein,” and “Untitled” in the book proves the possibility that the internet user may come across pornography. Amerika’s electronic art book marks the beginning of new media art through introducing a multifaceted view of scenes, exploiting digital art scenes. The book tells about a variety of subjects, including interactive storytelling and net art.

In this e-book, the content does not match the title of the book whereas the reader discovers that s/he is reading about multiple issues. Notably, Amerika remixes many topics in the book. He wants to expose that these are the main issues and topics, which are easily reachable and exist in the public domain. In “Remixing The ‘I’,” he touches some of that issues and implies that this trend becomes the public’s concern, especially when writing stories about the disclosure of new sexual trends that accompany the digital age. In this section, Amerika does not want to include these topics in his writing to discuss them so his work seems seminal or vulgar, but exposing them in the e-book implies the degeneration that reached most websites through dealing with these topics and making them the main source of income. Another implied issue in Amerika’s style through writing this e-book is the exposure of the loss of literariness; some literary works lose their artistic purposes when they are reduced through digitalizing them for the sake of marketing online. That process degrades ethics and art and creates cheap and confusing literature ultimately.

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Deciphering Rankine’s Pronouns

In Citizen: an American Lyric, Claudia Rankine usually employs the second person narrative point of view, the pronoun “you.” This narrative technique is a very powerful point of view that has the ability to influence readers in ways that first and third personal pronouns do not. In fact, one major reason for using the second narration point of view resides in the author’s intention to engage the reader in his/ her experience toward comprehending and realizing the significance of the threads and the implicit and explicit themes in literary texts.

Rankine utilizes the second-person, “you,” to address the reader for emotional impact, and this impact is best achieved by the use of this point of view. Through using this point of view, she exposes a considerable set of racist incidents that were experienced by her or her friends. In the book, Rankine’s style of narration splits between the “you” pronoun and the “I.” She recounts many instances of humiliation that has endured and experienced by the pronoun “you”; therefore, “you” becomes a symbol that signifies the black people who live in America, and “I” represents the poet’s voice in the poems or her implicit voice addressing it. Rankine explicitly mentions the reference of the pronoun “you”: “She is, he says, beautiful and black, like you” (78). Then, Rankine overtly tells one of the implications of using the first persona pronoun; the poet says: “Sometimes ‘I’ is supposed to hold what is not there until it is. … This makes the first person a symbol for something” (71). On the other hand, the pronouns “she” and “he” are always referring to the white people. In her poems, Rankine codes colors through pronouns. As an illustration, the poet Says: “You never really speak except for the time she makes her request and later when she tells you you smell good and have features more like a white person” (5). This sentence provides a clear example on how Rankine allocates pronouns to races. Another clear example is in this sentence: “would call you by the name of her black housekeeper?” (7).

Nevertheless, Rankine, after many poems, begins blurring the use of the pronouns in a way that compels the reader to hark or work harder to discover the distinction among them. She muddies the use of personas whom the pronouns indicate. To recognize the allocation of the pronouns, the following quote exposes the foundations of framing that use. The poet says: “sometimes, your historical selves, her white self, and your black self, or your white self and her black self arrive with the full force of the American positioning” (14). At the beginning, appointing certain pronouns to certain colors expresses the poet’s mood in diagnosing the prevailing status of racism among different ancestries and the suffering that accompanies this epidemic. Blurring the use of pronouns and their indications, later in the poems, suggests the poet’s attempt to express her aspirations and hopes of dissolving racism and discarding it just as the pronouns lost their ability to refer to a particular race or color.

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Galatea’s Moodiness

My second creative response explores, through providing some questions and their unexpected or abrupt answers, how Galatea is moody and responds differently to the same questions; I feel that Galatea is easily irritated when annoyed by some questions, and her anger may mislead a player or at least hinder his/ her progress while navigating toward the end of the game. Her mood changes easily and quickly, and a player does not always know exactly why. I started the game by asking about mind.

>ask Galatea about mind. She answered: “I’ve said everything I know.”

In fact, Galatea did not say anything before that question, and she befuddled me on how to start the second question. Then, I decided to greet her to calm down her anger.

>Galatea, hello. She answered: “A little late for that, don’t you think?”

Galatea is mad because I forgot to greet her earlier. She is right; however, I decided to repeat the greeting.

>Galatea, ok but hello. She answered: “You’ve already launched into the conversation without that nicety — it would be a little hard to go back now.”

Galatea is tough with me and does not offer concessions; her reply exposes her zero tolerance when committing the slightest error, and this fact adds reality to her personality. That response hints to the fact that if a player enters an error or commits a mistake while giving instructions, commands, and moving toward the end of the game, he/ she would lose his/ her navigation. However, I, then, decided to switch the topic and ask about love.

>ask Galatea about Love. She responds: “That it makes people behave like idiots,” she replies harshly.  “That it takes more than it gives.”

I noticed that either Galatea had a bad experience with love or her answer still reflects her bad mood in the previous conversation. Galatea needs time to recover, and I need to get to the end of the game quickly to write my response; I recognized that I might need more time to coax this mercurial personality. I wanted to talk about something else, so I said to Galatea, “Listen”.

>Galatea Listen. She responds, “You might try speaking to me,” she prompts. “It’s not polite merely to stare.  And I’ve gotten very bored, standing here.”

I have never even stared at her, I was actually staring at the laptop’s screen, waiting for her response; in this line, Galatea misunderstands me and that is another reality. What rejoice Galatea are some other threads that deal with topics like truth, cheese, life, etc. I spent hard time at the beginning with Galatea before reaching one of the game’s ends, so be careful and do not upset Galatea.

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“My Half Priori”

Rachel Zolf’s Neighbour Procedure

I tried as could as possible to expose some of the implied issues that Zolf hints and are left open to the readers during her subjunctive poem, “a priori,” pages 8-11. My creative response provides the complements which are the main clauses of the if-clauses in these pages. I searched the political, historical, cultural and social issues that Zolf tries to raise and sometimes evoke through her bunch of the if-clauses and completed them, hinting to some original stories as well.

“Tariq’s Half Priori”

If the Sabbath is a form of constraint, fishing is allowable on Sunday and the other week’s days.

If jihād is the first word learned, people would agree on its interpretation.

If Elie Wiesel is the Holocaust, he would be a president of Israel.

If one must expropriate gently, the looted may resist fiercely.

If messianism licks at the edges of thought, nothing impedes the destructive components.

If the truth does not lie in silence, the lie does not lie in sound.

If naf is self and brother, a fan is like a self’s brother.

If the space between two words can be bridged, the new phrases will lose the antonym connotations.

If moderate physical pressure is acceptable, any little psychological pressure is inadmissible.

If the primary target is the witness, the judge is a member in the crime.

If epistemological mastery is an uncloseable wound, mythological and metaphysical grip cannot heal the wound.

If bittahon was trust in God now military security, it is time to place his trust in God’s lovingkindness again.

If there is horror at the heart of divinity, it will strengthen delight in the heart of deviltry.

If the body goes off near the Sbarro pizzeria, why did she get out of the prison?

If the apocalyptic sting is gone from Hebrew, then it will not affect the pinched.

If the first stage is not knowing at all, the final stage is a complete chaos.

If this state is the golden calf, Moses would painstakingly think before smashing it.

If ingathering means expulsion, expulsion means explosion.

If catastrophe becomes a passion, humanity’s peace becomes at stake.

If we shoot and weep, this is the social and political hypocrisy in its perfect form.

If Israel is not in Israel, Palestine is Palestine.

If the treasure house of well-worn terms is laden with explosives, poverty and recession will sweep the state away.

If ha’apalah was catastrophic breakthrough now illegal immigration, was “MacDonald White Paper” serious?

If the bodies of the exploding martyrs smell of musk, another source is the musk deer’s glandular secretions.

If every breath of fresh air is a border, overloaded constraints are put on people’s breaths.

If the state no longer decides who lives or dies, defenseless individuals cannot determine that too.

If some are eternally innocent and good, others may be eternally guilty and bad.

If a key is an archival artifact, the lock resists its new rusty nature.

If the planes return safely, the hijackers must be failed in their missions.

If they are all enthusiasm, their lives won’t become inferno.

If you are Hamas, then you are “enthusiasm”.

If one is Israel, he cannot be Palestine.

If cruel history repeats itself as its own cure, the side effects of the expired cure will be active again.

If it happens inside the Sbarro pizzeria, how did she get out of the prison?

If there is invasion of the order of the border, the border will forever experience disorder.

If the animal is discomforted during slaughter, the slaughterer feels the same after the slaughter.

If the band of the blind plays and refreshments served, the deaf spectators would not enjoy the show.

If the third stage is but what can be done, the first and second stages failed for one part.

If shahīd is martyr and witness, then martyr means a witness.

If preventative is energetic liquidation, can the weak survive in the struggle!

If some are a community of fate, the community resides in their faith.

If we will and it is a fairy tale, Scheherazade would quit narration.

If Sbarro, what?

 

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Fiona Banner’s “The Nam”

In my close reading of this week texts, I focus my study on depicting the psychological status of the captain Willard, a major character in Fiona Banner’s The Nam, alongside to the realism that resulted from an honest and accurate description of the omniscient narrator. In her depiction, which makes the reader familiar with events exactly just as the spectator, Banner provides accurate descriptions through her words in the film scenes. She focuses her description on repeating dramatic words such as blood, black, shadow, mystery, explode, pistol, invisibility, and death. While reading, these words indicate the enigmatic scene, which she is watching and transcribing; she succeeds in conveying her sensations. Not to mention, the orange color is recurrent in her description. Even though orange indicates endurance, determination and enthusiasm, it is the color of fall and harvest; it represents an approaching disastrous end. The fading fire, which is the source of this color, is a motif in the film transcription. This kind of description gives the reader a complete and comprehensive imaging of what she is watching. She describes the hysterical and psychological state that soldiers suffer in wars.

In the case of Captain Willard, all of his body movements and his situation refer to his worse psychological status; he believes that “. . . When I was here I wanted to be there. . . . When I was there all I could think of was getting back into the jungle. . . .” (Banner 61). In the camp, he prefers going home, and at home, he wants to go back fighting. In conveying such status, Banner’s transcription never neglects the attention to minute descriptions and minor details. Therefore, a reader finds Captain Willard’s status worsens to the degree that he considers sitting in the bush is a source of power; sitting there, “you might say haunted,” (Banner 61) leaving the battlefield or waiting for battles is considered as a source of weakness because he wants to engage himself in war. He is haunted by going to wars. However, some transcriptions suggest defeatism from the inside. For instance, the representation of drinking alcohol heavily is to avoid hurting reality. The captain laughs alone, then he suddenly dances; he sits then stands, then he does martial exercises in a closed room, then he lays on the ground and talks to himself; the precise description of all this stuff portrays his situation. It seems that Banner refers to the curse of his intended action. He does stunt movement of his body, punching himself to hurt it, punishing himself for committing something. Incidentally, in her narrative, Banner shifts from present simple to present continuous back and forth during her narrative; this kind of shift in narrative refers to her constant presence in the transcription. She describes the film as if she is with the director, and her eye sees completely through the camera lens. She convinces the reader that she is not affecting the film plot, that she only conveys what she sees. That experience adds realism to the details and events.

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Kamau Brathwaite

Middle Passages consists of a new kind of differential texts in their forms and contents. Kamau Brathwaite sometimes uses the Jamaican Creole and that is what he calls “nation language.” So, this time, Brathwaite uses the spoken language in the Caribbean mixed with English in a way that the Caribbean identity and their nation language appear very clear in the work. A diversity of topics appears among the poems; he discusses war, conflict, history, politics, social commentaries, race, and ethnicity. In these texts, Brathwaite exploits the form and controls the content in order to achieve his intended purpose and deliver a clear message. He clearly challenges the way things are understood through the way he presents many topics, using a new form. Middle Passages texts are different from the previous ones that we have studied in a way that they convey messages that hold prominent issues whether social or political.

The use of the Caribbean languages, precisely the Jamaican Creole ​​in the writing and mixing it with English, confirms Brathwaite’s attempt to create a new national identity at least in literature, and that affirms the Caribbean identity. Then Brathwaite turns to the issues troubling him, the issues that carry with them the sense and worries of the nation and the nation’s aspirations towards a bright future. His poetry seems as if it is not written for the aesthetic taste, so the form is not his main concern. Moreover, the use of the English language symbolizes his interest in delivering his thoughts and inspirations globally; on the other hand, the use of the Caribbean language, not dialects, symbolizes addressing his nation in their own language in order to emphasize getting the message, believing that the real history of the Caribbean is in its language.

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Kenneth Goldsmith Works

In fact, “over-clarifications” results in defamiliarization or “Making Strange”, so this artistic device increases difficulty, hinders comprehension, and impedes readings. For what reason, this makes a difference, a difference between the poetic speech and the ordinary speech. This is exactly what Goldsmith does in his texts. He estranges the texts and the forms through the excessive clarification and providing the minute details. This technique defamiliarizes the content, framing his speech to distinguish the poetic of his language from the practical one.

Goldsmith presents unusual kind of writing; for instance, what is unusual in Soliloquy is that what comes to a reader’s mind out of the title meaning exists actually in the content and the way he presents it. When someone conducts or performs a soliloquy alone with himself, he does not consider thoroughly the format of his language nor mincing his words because he is talking alone to no audience; he speaks about what he sees and what comes to his mind in a disorganized way because the flow of ideas is usually disorganized when contemplation.

So this is exactly what Goldsmith does when he employs such a language in his writing because soliloquy presupposes the idea that there are no listeners even though Goldsmith is aware that his work is written to be read. Traffic has the same style as well. His works record every movement that may accompany the text when writing it; he is alert to all minute details when writing the texts. Therefore, these two texts seem as if they do not make sense, but the reality, of course, is the opposite. The in-depth studier of postmodernism comes up with connections and sense from any nonsense. It is true that the texts challenge the reader; however, such kind of challenge opens horizons for multiple explanations and discussions.

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Carpenter’s Works

What a striking experience to read digital literature! And what adds to this great experience is when the text represents postmodern premises. When I started looking at the required texts, I expected to find written text as usual, then I felt confused on how to approach them; however, I stared attempting to find the top of the thread to understand something. I think that the carpenter’s works are mixed with some kind of absurdity. No harm in that because we are reading texts of post-modernism, and this idea is one of the salient features of the writings in this period. The author represents meaningful but more meaningless actions, pictures, drawing, events, and finally words that call questioning the certainty of existential concepts such as truth, value, nothingness, emptiness or being in itself, but nothing left to chance. Certainly, these texts embody the idea of differential texts not only in their genre, but also in the meanings they carry for one single item.

For these texts, the first reading does not help much understanding of what is going on, but after perusal and scrutinizing the texts, graphics, lines, dots and fonts, I could find connection between the text and the intended meaning even though the meaning sometimes seems vague, and this vagueness led to the confusion at the beginning. Carpenter’s makes connection between the themes and the color she uses. For instance, in “The Cape”, she uses black and white color although the text was written in 2005. These two colors represent the time of the story; its events took place in the remote past. Another point is the motion of pictures. Since the words in any literary text, which composes the body of the plot and relates experiences, are absent in these works, a considerable portion is set for motion pictures to add more and precise details to the body of the work. They carry deep meanings and absolutely express themes.

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Where is the Sound?

In the performance, “Thread of the Voice” or “On myth,” Cecilia Vicuna started delivering her performance to the audience with a nice sound that carries a musical song, using the noise of the loops shells to add music to the song. But there is a question that carries an idea: does the sound matter? Vicuna appears as if she performs a soliloquy for herself, in which there is no sound, knowing that she addresses audience. The audience could not hear the important part of the performance about the central idea of the talk, which is myth. They could not hear that part because a problem in the microphone, and another reason is that she got sore throat; however, she declares that she was NOT going to repeat it. The audience has an excuse that they could not listen because she did not set the mike up well before she started speaking. Then she did not repeat what she said, so why did she perform to audience then? She agrees that “she perceives words in sounds” and “the word that we use now SOUND.” So, where is the sound? The audience missed the definition of myth, its origin, and two out of three contemporary mythical stories in South America. They missed Vicuna’s preferred myth and its story. Vicuna’s idea about not repeating the ideas that were conveyed through sound is because people may no longer care about myth nowadays, so she means that the audience need not to care about not hearing the sound that conveys words and language discussing myth. So did the audience miss nothing important? She mentions at the beginning, “Words are time”. Since time passes and is not repeated, she refuses to repeat her words about the first big part of the performance.

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